Perspectives of schematic design

I have been drawing plans, sections and perspectives to try and convey my ideas. It has been very difficult to express my vision. I am presuming this is due to the size of the space and the level changes as well as the openness between the two floors. Here are a few perspectives. The first and second sketches are views from the lower floor looking upward. The third is a view from the upper level.

The two bridges are encased in rectangular glass walls formed by triangles. The undersides of the bridges are used for lighting. Also the posts are enclosed in columns that include interesting lighting for the restaurant.

In the center of the lower floors there is a large lighted metal sculpture, that resembles cotton fibers being twisted together to form thread, that rises up through the opening to the upper level.

The stores will be more like stalls. You will have to walk through one to get to the next. I haven't completely worked this out yet.